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Snippet Sunday - INNOCENT TEARS - 10/01/2016 #romance #reading #newrelease



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INNOCENT TEARS will be re-released late-January.
It has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.

Here's another little snippet.

THANK YOU

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Emma typed the name on the keyboard, and while she waited for the details, she smiled at the girl, and asked, “Holidays?”
Nadine’s face spread into a small smile, but it was enough to show she had her two top teeth missing.
“And I see the tooth fairy has been to see you recently.”
“Excuse me–” Mrs. Gibbs glanced at Emma’s name badge. “–Emma. Can we proceed with the check-in please?”
“My apologies, ma’am.” Emma read the details on the screen, made a few notes and turned around to activate the automated door card in the back office. All the while, she felt Mrs. Gibbs’ glare on her and instinctively pulled on her navy uniform skirt feeling slightly uncomfortable.
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18 comments:

  1. The Belle in BlueJan 11, 2016, 1:59:00 AM

    I'm glad you're continuing with snippets from this story, and congrats on the re-release. And I *really* don't like Mrs. Gibbs already!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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    1. Iris BJan 11, 2016, 12:57:00 PM

      Thanks Joyce ... Yeah, Mrs Gibbs ... very unique ....

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  2. PTJan 11, 2016, 5:43:00 AM

    I agree -- not liking Mrs. Gibbs at all!

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    1. Iris BJan 11, 2016, 12:58:00 PM

      Good ... she's not nice ... thanks for stopping by, PT :-)

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  3. Chelle CorderoJan 11, 2016, 8:40:00 AM

    Gee,all I was thinking - would it hurt Mrs. Gibbs to crack a smile. I really feel for the little girl to be in the hands of such a curmudgeon.

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    1. Iris BJan 11, 2016, 1:02:00 PM

      Thanks Chelle ... there's light at the end of the tunnel for the little girl, yet, not soon, though.

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  4. LindaJan 11, 2016, 11:23:00 AM

    Hum, Mrs Gibbs sounds really harsh. I bet the tooth fairy never showed up in that house.

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    1. Iris BJan 11, 2016, 1:02:00 PM

      Yeah ... no tooth fairy with Mrs Gibbs around :-)

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  5. Elaine CantrellJan 11, 2016, 12:14:00 PM

    I agree with everyone else. Mrs. Gibbs doesn't sound like a sympathetic character.

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  6. UnknownJan 11, 2016, 1:39:00 PM

    Good luck with your re-release! Sounds like a good read - Emma sounds like a cutie so far :)

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  7. Veronica ScottJan 11, 2016, 1:43:00 PM

    Oh that Mrs. Gibbs sounds like one of THOSE people - officious and very unpleasant! Great snippet, really drew me in. Best wishes on the rerelease!

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  8. Karen Michelle NuttJan 11, 2016, 5:15:00 PM

    Mrs. Gibbs needs to take some 'nice' pills. lol Congrats on the upcoming release.

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  9. JTsuruokaJan 17, 2016, 4:36:00 PM

    Gotta agree with the crowd on Mrs. Gibbs. If you were going for unpleasant, you hit the mark!

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