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JOURNEY TO HER DREAMS was re-released early
August and
has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.
has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.
Here's another little snippet.
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YOU
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~~Today's snippet is a bit longer, but I wanted to add the whole dream sequence
otherwise it might be too confusing.~~
“Please don’t,”
she begged as her body was trembling, almost shaking. She stared blindly at the
windows, trying hard not to sob, as her throat tightened with each of his touches.
“Come on. Don’t
be like that,” he replied, moving his lips past her ear and down her neck. His
hand slid down her body and under her shirt.
“Please stop.
I’m awfully tired.”
He stared at
her and his mouth twitched. “Sweetheart, you’re always tired.”
Her efforts to
push him away were ineffective. His tight grip around her waist didn’t give her
much room to move out of his arms. She was helpless, as the more she denied
him, the more relentless he became. She felt his hand in her hair at the back
of her neck and he moved his head closer to hers. It sent shivers down her
spine.
“I love you,
sweetheart,” he said under his breath.
She could
barely speak and her words sounded throaty. “Please,” she whispered, nearly
sobbing. “Please don’t.”
He lowered his
head, and she assumed that he would whisper something in her ear. She knew she
was fighting in vain when he trailed caressing kisses along her neck with his
mouth; he wouldn’t listen. With his body against hers, his breathing against
her neck became heavier and stronger. Turning her head away from him, she
closed her eyes and did her best to ignore the pain with each movement.
When she heard
him under the shower, she slowly went into the guest room down the hallway,
took a little teddy bear out of the bottom drawer in the cupboard, and sat on the
bed. She cradled her friend as the tears streamed down her face.
Please, someone help me, please, she sobbed. Please, someone.
She heard him
coming towards the room, and quickly wiped her face with a tissue and carefully
placed her little teddy bear back into the rear of the drawer underneath her
pink and yellow baby blanket.
“How about I
prepare us a nice dinner?” he asked with contentment.
Her faint smile
held a touch of sadness and pain. It was just as painful on her lips as what
had just happened between them. Yet still she smiled. “Sounds good,” was all
she was able to whisper.
Hollie woke up in a sweat—as usual. Her breathing was deep and fast as she cried and her body ached. What was this? Why did she keep dreaming of this woman? And who on earth was she?
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Wow that was so intense, I had no idea it was a dream until the end came. I think Hollie might also want to know who the man is because he doesn't seem too nice.
ReplyDeleteshe most certainly does ... and will soon. Thanks Linda.
DeleteOMG, that was terrifying! My heart just breaks for the woman in the dreams, but I have to know more! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by. I appreciate you comment.
DeletePowerful story telling and I definitely need to know more! Terrific excerpt...
ReplyDeleteThank you for the compliment. Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteWow, that caught my attention with no trouble at all!
ReplyDeleteYeah ! Thanks Elaine. I'm really glad you liked it.
DeleteThat was a crazy intense scene. Almost couldn't read through. You did your job there of setting the tone of the scene.
ReplyDelete"crazy intense" is good, very good. :-) Thanks Cecilia!
DeleteSuch a sad snippet! I hope Hollie finds out who she is and finds a way to save her.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dianne. Yes, she will go on a "journey to her dreams" to find out ☺
DeleteVery intense. I want to know who they are and why she dreams of them. Are they real people? So many questions!
ReplyDeleteThanks PT ... all will be revealed ... sooner or later ;-)
DeleteYikes! You really ratcheted up the tension in this scene. It's very powerful.
ReplyDeleteI'm stoked by the compliment. Thanks Jeff :-)
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