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JOURNEY TO HER DREAMS was re-released early August and
has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.
If you'd like to review the story, you can get a copy here.
has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.
If you'd like to review the story, you can get a copy here.
Here's another little snippet.
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The night was fairly clear and warm, considering this was only the
beginning of summer. Even though a state in Australia, Tasmania didn’t enjoy
the hot days like its northern counterparts, so not surprisingly, many people took
the opportunity to go out and about. Hollie took a deep breath when she got
outside. She noticed she was still holding Jeremy’s hand, and quickly withdrew
hers.
He smiled at her actions, and Hollie wondered whether the job had taught
him so much confidence, or whether it was just the way he was. Jeremy placed
his arm around her shoulder to guide her down the street to his car.“This is your car?” she asked.
“Yes. Why? What’s wrong with it?” he asked, sounding a bit insulted.
“Well, it’s sort of big. And expensive. And it seems brand new.” Jeremy only laughed as he opened the door of the black BMW for her.
“I did warn you I live outside Launceston on a small farm, didn’t I?” Hollie told him. “So no blaming me if the car gets dirty.” She got inside and made herself comfortable on the passenger seat, enjoying the luxuries of the car—all leather and a dashboard like an airplane’s—lights and buttons everywhere.
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Thanks for all your comments,
I do appreciate each single one of them!
Seems like she's a little self-conscious about all the bling. I love a hero with good taste. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI do too :-) Thanks Paula.
DeleteI like the comparison to an airplane. New cars amazing me. All we have to do is hit buttons on our new and things open and shut on their own. LOL!! Great snippet. :)
ReplyDelete... and they park by themselves too :-) LOL ... Thanks Jennifer.
DeleteSweet! I hope she doesn't feel out of place with his wealth. He seems nice, so far.
ReplyDeleteHe's a nice guy :-) Thanks Dianne.
DeleteQuite the car! Enjoyed the snippet very much...
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Veronica. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteWhat a great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cecilia :-)
DeleteThis snippet is wonderful about showing WHO the characters are without a lot of info dump. She seems to be just a "simple country gal" and he exudes confidence. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks Chelle for your kind words. Really appreciate them.
DeleteNice way of contrasting the two characters via the car.
ReplyDeleteThanks PT :-)
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