#SweetSat Sample - 16/06/12


This is a sample from my first book "Sweet Dreams, Miss England"

Nicky is my main character. She lives in London with two young girls. She's just made friends with two Irish women who are now in London to enjoy the sights with two of their -male- friends.


“Yes, that’s my husband.”
Daniel raised his eyebrows. “I had no idea, honestly. So he’s in the States and you’re living here with your kids?”
“Yes.”
“Do you still love him?”
Nicky hesitated. She was quite tempted to give him an honest answer, an answer she thought he deserved, but she had no idea where he was going with this questioning, so she lapsed back to her old self and put up her safety wall.
“This is none of your business.” Nicky was about to stand up when he took hold of her hand and held her back.
“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to upset you. I am really sorry,” he said.
She looked at him and knew he was sincere with his apology. “Sorry, Daniel. People have been digging into my private life for such a long time and so often, purely for gossip and financial reasons, it has become very difficult to trust people.”
Nicky sensed Daniel’s look on her. She was expecting him to comment on what had just been said, but he remained silent. It was an odd feeling, a feeling as though he was about to take her in his arms, but the moment soon passed. She was relieved, because the friendship and the trust that came with it were still too new. He was still holding her hand, though, and Nicky made no attempts to take it away. She liked to feel his gentle hands on hers.
“Love is such a big word,” she said. “People just use the word, without even thinking what it actually means. Most of us don’t even know what it means, until we’ve found our true love. ”
“My grandfather always says: ‘you know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.’”
Nicky smiled at the sentiment. “I think I might like your grandfather.” She was well aware of the fact that Daniel had caused her many sleepless nights over the last few weeks.


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9 comments:

  1. I love the depth of this sample and all those unanswered questions.

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  2. Yes, I'm now very curious about Nicky's story...and what will happen next.

    Here's MY SWEET SATURDAY SAMPLE

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  3. I think I might like Daniel's grandfather too. This is a lovely scene--warm and real.

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  4. Very good scene to give us a little insight into Nicky

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  5. Nice scene. Great quote, too. And I'm curious about the husband. Guess I'll have to read about him!

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  6. I find myself wondering about the back story here. Great dialogue!

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  7. I love your Sweet Saturday story Iris. D,

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  8. Thank you everyone for stopping by - much appreciated!

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  9. Very nice sample! Looking forward to reading more of this story.

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