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FRESH BEGINNINGS
We continue with Fresh Beginnings, Jared's story as he travels through five states
in the US in a Motorhome. I used our itinerary from our US travels two years ago
and wrote a romance story around in.
Jared has just arrived in the US.
Enjoy!
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Ivy stared
after the green car she had exited in a hurry only seconds earlier. Creepy was
a word that came to mind when she thought about the driver. Creepy, eerie, and
all the other foul-language words under the sun. The old man had given her a
lift into downtown Las Vegas and had offered her to take a bit further towards
east. She had really appreciated his help. That was until his hand was on her leg.
Persistently, even after she had nicely told him she wasn't that kind of girl.
A shiver ran down her spine merely at the thought. She guessed he'd have been
in his seventies.
in the US in a Motorhome. I used our itinerary from our US travels two years ago
and wrote a romance story around in.
Jared has just arrived in the US.
Enjoy!
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Ivy stared
after the green car she had exited in a hurry only seconds earlier. Creepy was
a word that came to mind when she thought about the driver. Creepy, eerie, and
all the other foul-language words under the sun. The old man had given her a
lift into downtown Las Vegas and had offered her to take a bit further towards
east. She had really appreciated his help. That was until his hand was on her leg.
Persistently, even after she had nicely told him she wasn't that kind of girl.
A shiver ran down her spine merely at the thought. She guessed he'd have been
in his seventies.
Leaving
Dylan had been the easy part, but, with only a few dollars in her purse,
getting to as far east as possible was the hard part.
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Thanks for all your comments,
I do appreciate each single one of them!
I hope Ivy will be all right. I hope that creepy old guy doesn't circle back.
ReplyDeleteShe'll be right :-) Thanks Karen.
DeleteOh, ugh, poor Ivy. First steps can be easy, but the next ones are usually tougher. :P
ReplyDeleteVery good scene, Iris! :)
Methinks she should have planned her escape a bit better... Great scene.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we do thing in the heat of the moment. Thanks PT.
DeleteWell that WAS creepy. She's lucky the old man didn't pursue her. Seems she's a bit naive...Will be interesting to see what she does next and how she meets Jared!
ReplyDeleteShe will soon ;-) Thanks Veronica.
DeleteThat's creepy. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Elaine :-)
DeleteThat is indeed a creepy encounter. Just what she doesn't need on top of everything else. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteOh my god! Old guys can be so insistent. I hope he won't come back with flowers.
ReplyDeleteLOL ... thanks Linda !
DeleteI can personally say I know how she feels. Creepy is not a good enough description for it. I've had an old guy hit on me at work, more than once the same guy.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet. The beginning is always easy, its the rest that's a rocky road ahead.
Thanks for stopping buy. I appreciate your comment.
DeleteCreepy. Definitely creepy. Great snippet ... conveys the mood very well
ReplyDeleteThanks Nicolette :-)
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